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Query Package Critique

Having trouble getting agent attention with your query package? Do you want a second pair of eyes on it?

Look no further! I can take a look at all aspects and let you know my opinion on how to strengthen it. I'll beta read the first ten pages, do minor edits and make suggestions on the query letter, and analyze the synopsis for areas where it can be tightened.

This service is open to all genres. No MG or Picture Books please.



Query Letter ONLY:

First 10 pages ONLY:

Synopsis ONLY:

All three:





If you're interested in this service, please contact me via
the contact form on the "Contact" page or DM me on Twitter!

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